drkness seeps through my veins
as i haul the dead body over the hill
he deserved every last minute of his deserved death
i hear sirens swarming
i must go but i need to finish
thats what happens to those who
kill my father
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abrupt and straight to the point, but you probably could of dove a little deeper concerning this subject. Good.
ReplyDeleteps did u read my newest poem(s)?
wow both dylans are depressed
ReplyDeletecreeeeepy...but i second dylan's comment. i feel as if u could describe it more. just saying, you know, my two cents.
ReplyDeleteseriously, you're both starting to scare people...
yep hey alien lol
ReplyDeleteYeah. It needs more guts and feelings.
ReplyDeletemmhmm. not literally on the guts part though. that's just...eeeeeew.
ReplyDeletei liked the poem :) : ) : ) : ) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :): (: ) :) :) :) :( :
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