Oh and this is my alliteration poem, cause otherwise it wouldnt have any in it!
Death Dwells Deep
Disabling the ability
to sleep
to care
Destroying down under
what matters the most
Pleasure gone
nothing left to Placate
that growing sense
of Panic
Periodically Peering at
you
Insecurity Intensified
Initiating
the darkside of your
Intellect
and encouraging
Insanity
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is everyone using vocab words in their poems?
ReplyDeleteoh, and i don't think there's enough alliteration, especially in the second stanza.
overall, GREAT poem! as always ;)
placate! and yes, aileen, people SHOULD be using vocab words in their poems!
ReplyDeletehahahahahaha wow
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