Friday, February 13, 2009

I am


I am a girl with eyes like diamonds
As sweet as chocolate
I am sarcastic most of the time
And I definitely hate the green fruit called lime
I am courteous to all
I help people up every time they fall
I am always respectful
I am also oh so very social
I am Rachel Ray
I love to play
I am a monkey
weird and crazy
also sometimes serious and sometimes lazy
I am as warm as a fire
and I would hate to be a liar
I am unique in my own ways
I love to eat lays
I am a student at Crestdale Middle School
I am like winter, always cool
I love the beach in every way
I wish I could go there w=every single day
I can be soft a cloud
and also as hard as a rock
I am as graceful as a feather falling to the ground
and when it's peaceful
I love to make sound
I am a concert, ready to rock out
I love to scream and also shout
I am the author of my own life story
and even though people call me a shorty,
I try to picture myself as tall as a tower
And when I get mad, I'm like a bomb waiting for go off,
I am Rachel Udelson


And yes I wrote this by myself

4 comments:

  1. you did a great job using similes and metaphors in this. i think you could tell everyone liked it by their response when you read it in class. nice job! :-)

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  2. Heyy rachel,
    I think that you did a awesome job. This is a very good poem.

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  3. i love your peom rachel...its a lot longer and better than mine

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  4. I didn't know you lose your temper???

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