Saturday, February 14, 2009

Happiness

Here is a good poem that will definitely bring down the valentines day "mood".

Please forgive me, I just wrote it.

Happiness is a veil
That hides the truth behind it
The wallpaper
On the cracked and stained walls of reality

These walls foundations
Were built from the bodies of the truth
and the wallpaper
was built from you

The decieved
The decievers
The spinner
Of the lies themselves

In reality
You are the decieved
The decievers
And I am the deliverer
Of truth

6 comments:

  1. Dylan, I'm impressed by this. Very well written. And you're right...this is definitely a contrast to the loving poems from Valentine's Day.

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  2. That is a good poem Dylan. Did you write it?

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  3. Yes I wrote it. I wont put anything on here that I didnt write.

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  4. that was really good. and really deep, it gave me something else to think about. *ponders*

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  5. yea once you think about all the things that happen on vday you really do feel different

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  6. OMG THAT IS sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing. wowowow

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